To conclude, it is clear now that (thesis strong/emotional).
We have proven that if (thesis strong/emotional) then (reason 1), (reason 2), and (reason 3, strongest reason).
For the sake of (name all the people effected by your 3 reasons), we must (actions that will help the thesis come true).
(indent ——->)To conclude, it is clear now that all students should get those wonderful iPod Touches. We have proven if the extremely helpful iPods are given to students then every child will be smarter, happier, and safer. This is why for the sake of all the East Newark students, we must write to companies, banks, and groups to find money to purchase new iPod touches for all the children of East Newark.
© 2010 David Mach