In conclusion, we must (thesis strong/emotional) .
We have seen that if (thesis strong/emotional) then(reason 1), (reason 2), and (reason 3, strongest reason).
The future of (name all the people effected by your 3 reasons) depends on (thesis strong/emotional)!
(indent ——>)In conclusion, we must help all students get the wonderful iPod Touches. We have seen that if those magnificent iPods are given to students then every child will be smarter, happier, and safer. The future of all the East Newark students, depends on making sure all students get those extremely helpful iPod Touches right away!
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