The final, and strongest reason that(thesis) is (3rd reason).
According to a study done at (name of college),…
This is EXTREMELY important because…
Please picture in your mind….(something really good if thesis comes true)
The final, and strongest reason that all students should get iPod Touches is because it is proven that technology can make students safer. According to a study done at Rutgers University, 85% of kidnappings in America happen to children without reliable cell phones to call for help. This is EXTREMLY important because the safety and health of East Newark’s children is more important than anything else, and if iPod Touches will make our children safer from kidnappers then no price is too much to pay. Please picture in your mind a world where the horrible tragedy of kidnapping has been totally eliminated thanks to wonderful technology like iPod Touches.