TS- Explain the second reason that proves your THESIS using your character with a problem.
CD- Give one example, story, or dialogue about your character trying to solve the problem because of the above reason.
CM-Say why your CD is important
CS-Say your TS again in stronger more emotional words
Second of all, Jose knows that he could be happier with a new iPod Touch.
“Hey Jose, what’s wrong? You look so sad today,” asked Jose’s best friend Jenny.
“Oh, wazzup, Jen? I don’t know. I just feel so bored and depressed.”
“No problem! My parents just got me a new Ipod Touch. What do you want to do? We can call Marcos and Diana and see what they’re doing. Or we can you’re your favorite game Nazi Zombies 2D. Or what about taking funny pictures of ourselves and posting it to our Edmodo account? I know! Let’s do the fun, new Study Island assignments Mr. Mach finally assigned! The best part is that we can listen to the New Lil Wayne album while we work on it.”
“Hey that sounds awesome! Wow! That iPod Touch can do everything. If I want to stay happy this winter, I have just GOT to find a way to get one.”
“Do you want to go online and research ways we can have fund raisers to get money for our school to buy one for each of us?”
“Great idea! We will become legends in East Newark forever if we could do that! I feel so much better already. Thanks, Jenny.”
Can you imagine students leading happier, more interesting and fulfilling lives because an iPod Touch? What kind of person doesn’t want children to be as happy as possible? If you don’t want the children of East Newark to be depressed, then you have to help find a way to get them all iPod Touches.