TS- Explain the first reason that proves your THESIS using your character with a problem.
CD- Give one example, story, or dialogue about your character trying to solve the problem because of the above reason.
CM-Say why your CD is important
CS-Say your TS again in stronger more emotional words
First of all, Jose knows that he could be smarter with a new iPod Touch. Jose read in a recent Newsweek that students with “smart phones” score 35% higher on tests. That’s why he asked his parents for a new iPod touch. Unfortunately however, Jose’s parents need to save money during this economic recession, so they told him it was impossible to get the phone. Can you imagine how hard it must have been to tell your son that he has to miss out on being smart just because of something was too expensive? This is why we must work to find ways to get Jose and all East Newark students those new iPod Touches.