The first reason that(thesis) is (1st reason).
Research has proven that…
This is important because…
Please picture in your mind (something really good if thesis comes true)
The first reason that all students should get iPod Touches is because it is proven that technology can make students smarter. Research has proven that test scores of students with “smart phones” are 35% higher than students without. This is important because if East Newark wants big test score increases than all it has to do it by new iPod Touches for students. Please picture in your mind, lots of awards and scholarships being given to high scoring East Newark students if iPod touches were given to each student.